Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Personification Essay


Personification- Hurricane
I am one of the most destructive things in human nature. My ability to cause damage is inevitable. People may run, people may hide but they cannot hide from my wrath. My presence is immense, my season is to be feared for 100 days. I love the warm waters, and the warm waters love me. Anyone who says they're not afraid during my time is either a fool or a liar, or a little bit of both. I am the great and almighty HURRICANE.
            I may come in all shapes, the bigger I am the more damage I may cause. The warmer the waters then the bigger and hungrier I will become. My eye is located in the middle, it is the nucleus of my body. Here, I am the strongest, the most dangerous place that people hope are not around when I touch land.
            I am full of anger. My strong winds destroy cars, houses, electricity posts, and many more objects. I am the reason why governors and presidents have to spend more money for reliefs. I block out the happy weather, there is no sun to be found when I am around. My lightning rays and thunder scare people, my thunder is me screaming. Seeing people scream and hide is my pleasure, especially when someone jumps when I scream.
            I know I have done my job once I am on the news even after I have made my way through land. The after effect of my wrath of destruction is long lasting. I am also very expensive, I have the ability to make the U.S economy even worse. Although people think I am purely evil I am not. I have the ability to teach people important life lessons. Future parents will be able to tell their kids about this experience and teach their kids to appreciate life. Individuals will have a new start, the lessons they learn right now will make them a better person overall. All thanks to me, not only do I bring an end to things I also make way for new beginnings. After the storm comes sunshine, unfortunately.

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Thesis for 1500 word essay


Obesity these days is increasing more in children than it is in adults. This fact is just astonishing, it is suppose to be the other way around. These kids are the future of our society and they are being out in danger of dying at an earlier age. I believe that it is our parents’ responsibility to take better care of us starting at a young age. Our parents are the two people that influence us the most, especially when we are kids! Parents these days are just looking for anything to blame for their mistakes instead of admitting them and trying to fix them. It is not the companies fault for trying to make money, afterall, it is the parents’ fault for buying the high calorie junk food for their children. The percentage rate of diabetes in children has been increasing gradually over the past ten years. Now that is an astonishing fact! The fact that companies target kids to make them want their food does make a parents’ job harder, but who said being a parent would be easy? Fast food companies are well aware of the fact that some parents are not as responsible as others and they will target those parents. As they succeed to exploit irresponsible parents the more the kids just keep coming and then, “hello diabetes!”

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

 Describe the world you come from – for example, your family, community or school – and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
Suggestions for Prompt #1 (Freshman)
• The majority of your response should be the description of your world.
• While describing your world, don’t forget to add how the world has influenced your development as a student, or as a person.



Ideas…. The most important people in my life have influenced me to become the student and person I am.
Born in los angeles,
Seing  things at a young age made me more mature than other individuals around me.
Mom is strong and brave, I am like my mom.. my moral intelligence helps me..
Nice community.
Don’t associate with troublemakers.
Smart love sports. ( volleyball and basketball )
Live with two parents and sister, mellow person
Love the 90’s music, today music is not a lyrically inspiring as before..
Want to expand my knowledge in every subject.. I like researching interesting things.
My world.. mellow all over the place. Fun unique active friends family volleyball basketball running MUSIC 90’s
Hopeless thinker.. I picture how a perfect world would be and its not her in los angeles : )
Tv, video games
Love math, calculus helps you solve real world complex problems.

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

“We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence, then, is not an act, but a habit.”




                                                                                                   -Aristotle